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The Unfinished Work

"Distress'ed mind, forbear" Tapestry unfinished Piece contradistinguished Color varieties Leaves one's thoughts astonished Like dance well choreographed God in his wisdom knew What this feeble heart anguished Each day like unfinished Embroidery__beauty Still yet unaccomplished Like a heart that's unchurched Just waiting the spirit On them be bequeathed When enters astonished Will they be___unfinished Like quilt put together Waiting to be finished Yes__God will have to work His magical design That in his plan aligned (After reading Edna St. Vincent Millay from "Huntsman What Quary?(1939) Poem # 3. used her first line __direct quote "Distress'ed mind, forbear".)

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Date: 8/5/2011 11:42:00 AM
Congrats Sara on having this poem make it to first round competition in PS. contest my friend.. G.L.luv.
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Date: 8/3/2011 8:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Sara and good luck!
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Date: 8/3/2011 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Sara. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2011 7:54:00 PM
congrats on the placement of the first round.
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Date: 8/2/2011 9:45:00 AM
Sara, Good Luck! Congratulations on your poem's capture of the first round. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/19/2010 2:52:00 PM
Sara, This is a beautiful poem you have created. Not only beautiful but inspiring and speaks to the poet soul in each of us. I am also a fan of Edna St. Vincent Millay. Thank you so much for your nice comments on my poem Shards of Shanghai Blessings, Connie
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Date: 4/19/2010 2:17:00 PM
Sara my friend, I love this piece. It is very well written and visual.
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Date: 4/19/2010 1:44:00 PM
point well taken. john
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Date: 4/19/2010 6:16:00 AM
Very keen observations on life and the way the pieces of the world's quilt fit together in God's carefully "aligned" plan. Great work, Sara! Love, Carolyn
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