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The Underlying Object

Dust off the antiques that time has past over Again the four leaf and unlucky clover Was bound to be found again, as luck would have A gent walked in and no price was halve Valuable enough twice again To cause the pause for him to think it wrong He would have it, have it, not very long as Fate herself could not have seen, for his mirth And glee didn't take guess at the objects worth, The old man off to cackle, free to sin. Walking out the shop he stopped to ponder Who were they? They were not all that much fonder Yet growing older he gasped air through straws And this was the last, he smashed with broken claws, This antiques beauty he prayed not to seek Why in God's name? He screamed as he looked in, Spiraling spiritually down and then, It was the last moment, he saw master, God, lightning, the devil was for him faster He saw the underlying object, weak. The object sits quietly now, in another store collecting dust, A tepid conclusion, but quietly reflecting in ancient rust.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/6/2011 9:35:00 PM
The antiques really creak with age in this verse. Imagination and interesting story.
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Date: 8/4/2011 12:39:00 AM
wow. interesting story. I like it
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Date: 7/30/2011 4:03:00 PM
Soup Mail!!!!!
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Date: 7/30/2011 12:53:00 PM
i find this truly reflective , tim... lovely contemplation of those things unseen or seen..:) huggs, nette
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Tim B
Date: 7/30/2011 1:30:00 PM
Thanks nette :) Indeed we do not always know what lies beneath!
Date: 7/30/2011 2:13:00 AM
an intriguing write Tim.. very intense lines with fluid motion of activity.. spiritual warfare at its ultimate luv.. yes the Strega poem is more made up lore of Italians ... some say she exists ..others not... but for the contest I expanded on my knowledge from a child about the stories heard.. she has a dual personality according to legend .. watch out for her pasta pot...oh..
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Tim B
Date: 7/30/2011 1:29:00 PM
I am terrified of her pasta pot, believe you me :) Thanks for the kind comments as well Mrs. Linda.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things