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The Underground

Gaze on face on Underground lives on... Mic like fire flames I spit on... I possess and embody the powers that lies spiritually and its so real Habitually I used to write about candy and liquor. But now I write how candid and equal I stay up all night to perfect my rhymes, dialect the words and discard all primes I've never been known- no one like... Oh he's nice or he's got skills Before the days of rhyming and sleep pills Mic perversion; the nucleus of knowledge I pass on. Amidst evil I strive on Assuage every lyrical latent I was born to spit flames with hypothetical cadence I am the light that shines from the dregs I am he with the strength of helium mixed with sweat

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Date: 4/29/2016 10:46:00 AM
Godwin, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/29/2016 8:02:00 AM
Godwin Prince,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/29/2016 7:50:00 AM
Great read! I remember those days of candy and liquor!
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