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The Undead Story

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The Undead Story

Numb in this wrecked skin
My eyes still working hard in its blurred sight
Walked limply with no direction
Pursuit the hope of a lost life

This town is full of dead dreams
People dive in patterns of camouflaged sin
Those are black bloods which stained 
As well as my existance which is faint

Dried roses fallen
Shattered as a carpet
My brain didn't work
But this bloody veins pushed me too hard

I fail to recall yesterday
As I fail to hope for tomorrow
This is the eternal thirst 
No water can satisfy this

I see somebody in that mirror
Not in a good shape nor in a good look
I tried to see it even closer
But the reflection keeps bumping at me

With amazement face, it stares back at me

I continue my walk in this messed street
I don't have any idea how it starts
I don't have any idea when it ends
I live for today, I live along with the step I take

Yanny Widjanarko 
October 18,2013
Halloween Poem Contest with Only 1 theme
Sponsor: Leonora Galinta

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  1. Date: 12/14/2013 8:57:00 PM
    a most interesting title and concluding line for this one!! I live along with the step I take. I sure like that!!! I see this won in the contest. BIG congrats, dear.

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 1:03:00 AM
    Bravo!! Nice poem and congrats on your win!! :) G.

  1. Date: 11/23/2013 4:52:00 AM
    good poem Yanny congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/26/2013 5:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you SH :D hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/21/2013 5:06:00 PM
    Congrats on the well deserved win :) Good one

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/22/2013 10:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Karen, :D glad to see you here :D hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/21/2013 4:46:00 AM
    Good one Yanny, congratulations on your win xx

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/22/2013 10:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mandy, long time no see :D hug, hug, Yanny :p
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 8:35:00 PM
    Yanny, , Congratulations on your win. take care ~xox~ LINDA

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/22/2013 10:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Lindaaa, hug, Yanny :D
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 6:46:00 PM
    You show pity for the poor Zombie and he needs it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/22/2013 10:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Joyce, I loved your zombie poem too, and congrats to you too :D hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 4:55:00 PM
    Yanny, . Congratulations with your awesome Zombie win. Stay Alive LOL....... SKAT ~Love

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/22/2013 10:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol thanks Skat, don't worry I'm definitely stay fully alive lol :D glad to have you here Skat :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 9:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win, Yanny

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/22/2013 10:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Dr. Ram, pleasure to have your visit :)
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 9:03:00 AM
    Yay Yanny! Congratulationson your win!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/20/2013 9:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yay! Finally! Lol, thanks Rick! :D how are you there? By the way, I just saw the last year fireflies tree again today, I always feel excited to see whenever I pass through that house :D
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 8:11:00 AM
    - Interesting to read about Zombies - glad that they are not real! - Congratulations on your winning poem Yanny !! :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/20/2013 9:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne, lol, they are not real but my face seems like look almost similar as them now, lol glad to have you here Anne :D wishing you a wonderful day there, hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 7:17:00 AM
    Congratulations my dear friend Yanny on your super win in my contest with only one theme, “Zombie”! I extremely love and thoroughly enjoyed your very entertaining and outstanding spooky poem. Thank you so much for your loving support. More blessings! By the way, I've missed seeing you around. Love lots and big hugs, Leonora

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/20/2013 9:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Leonora, it is hard to stay awake at night now as my pregnancy getting bigger (I used to write at night :D) and your contest really recall all of my abandoned muse lol, glad to be apart of it :D and missed you too here :D wishing you a wonderful day there, hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/1/2013 6:28:00 PM
    It appers that you and I are on the same wave length. Check out my latest poem. I am a zombie as well *lol* This is really good, I am sure Leonora will love it!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/3/2013 9:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I read yours Rick, it is really hilarious one, you make it into an enjoyable masterpiece, good luck to you too for the contest :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 3:56:00 PM
    a great story of the undead good pen gl in contest Shadow x smile

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 10/18/2013 7:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Shadow :) glad to have a visit by you :) hug, yanny
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 11:38:00 AM
    - Strange creatures .... well it's just fantasy, Yanny. - Chilling written - Luck in contest! - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 10/18/2013 11:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne, great to see you here today :D wishing you a wonderful day too there :D hug, Yanny