The Typewriter

Some winter day, In Orson's realm... Or was it just a film? One Paris night, Along The Seine streams... Or was it in my dreams? I saw them, spies, I heard all the cries... Or had I been dreaming? A machine gun Would not stop to run... Or was it still this film? I woke up, then, To grab a new pen... Could THAT all make MY film? The typewriter let her fingers run... WHO'LL STOP THIS MACHINE GUN!? (Written on 04/27/2013)

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/23/2013 5:10:00 PM

THIS IS VERY NICLY WRITTEN AND I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing. Blessings.... Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2013 10:27:00 PM

Aha, I HAVE met you before. I see that I had commented to this one and you replied to my comment several months ago. I will say goodnight to you now!

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/7/2013 12:17:00 PM

Thanks for coming so often to pay a visit to my poems and add new comments, dear Andrea! It"s true that the mood of the day can change our interpretation of a text we "ve already known before; and suddenly comes a new image, a new aspect, new sounds and new colours! So, you are welcome at any time! Hugs, Hanitra

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 5/16/2013 7:26:00 AM

Cool ending, my friend. I like poems with a good punchline and this is it. Lovely writing. :-)

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/4/2013 9:06:00 AM

I can't help punching at anything, any thought, anyone coming across; for fun and play... off curse!(^_^) Have a nice time, Lysia, and many many thanks for the read!

Joseph May

Date: 5/10/2013 3:47:00 PM

nicely penned...best wishes in the contest

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/4/2013 9:13:00 AM

On my way to pay a visit to your latest poems, dear Joseph! Thanks for the read!

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/1/2013 3:08:00 AM

so visual so creative,,,

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 5/5/2013 3:34:00 AM

Thanks so much for your visit, Harry! Have a nice weekend! Love, Hanitra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2013 1:53:00 AM

I sure like how you picked up speed and started writing like crazy at the end. COOL.

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 5/5/2013 3:45:00 AM

Hi, Andrea! Happy that you got the message! I'm not always that sure that the images are expressive enough and your comments help a lot! Thank you very much for your visit and GOOD LUCK for the contest! You wrote a nice text as always! Love, Hanitra

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/27/2013 6:44:00 PM

I just love it! So creative. Hugs Rick. I am honored you like my form.

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 4/27/2013 7:14:00 PM

It has right away been a real pleasure, Rick! Just from the beginning! I love this rhythm and the concept is so simple, you are such a genius! Thank you for this uplifting visit! Have a nice weekend! Love, Hanitra