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The Twist

could i resist, the awesome bliss, though danger says abide, she has a husband/boyfriend this, the sweetest loving bride.... the twist, is suicide, ... Don re p.d. comment on 'Eye c'

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Date: 7/18/2012 9:16:00 AM
You be treading on shakey ground my friend! Be careful!
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Date: 7/16/2012 5:25:00 PM
Now that is certainly the twist Don! Wow, great write here my friend! I enjoyed this twist of a poem a lot! Awesome Work!!
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