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The Twirl

You danced with me under the youthful trees no music played just the summer breeze you took my breath with every touch your words were perfect you said just enough i tried to hide how you made me feel because i knew that We Just Couldnt Be You already Had Your Girl And I Was Just Someone You Liked to Twirl That night we spent beneath the stars when you told me you loved me , and showed me all your scars that night i should have held your hand that night i didnt kiss you when i should of had But that night i was someone elses girl so all we shared was a midnight twirl on those swings so many stories we would tell you were the first that in love I fell !

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Date: 3/2/2014 7:43:00 AM
Lovely poem. What could maybe have been...what if...but perhaps better this way; love triangles hold countless snares. // paul
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Date: 2/7/2014 1:02:00 PM
A notty poem when infidelity tempts. An entertaining poem on infatuation. Fun to read. Pls coment my latest poem too.
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Date: 2/7/2014 9:20:00 AM
Melancholy memories of the one that got away. Creatively written. It flows.
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Date: 2/6/2014 8:47:00 PM
Welcome to the soup Sarah hope you find many new friends here and enjoy the soup family. I enjoyed reading this poem of yours about love I could sense the emotion you were emitting from it. Your soup friend Michael P.S. stop by and check out some of my works someday
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