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The Twining

Fog and clouds meet It's no feat now Repeat fog twines

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/4/2014 9:10:00 PM
by the way, I am sure you saw the Camelot movie. It was from the 60's and a great musical.
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Date: 9/4/2014 9:09:00 PM
oh, it's the than-bauk. It is a strange form to me, but I like how you did yours, especially the first two lines!
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Date: 9/4/2014 3:10:00 PM
Not a form I've heard of Sara, but I love your words, James :)
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Date: 9/4/2014 11:54:00 AM
Wow ultra small yet powerful write Sara!
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Date: 9/4/2014 10:22:00 AM
We hardly ever see this form, Im so glad you used it. I enjoyed..BG
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Date: 9/4/2014 9:23:00 AM
you mesmerize in just a few words, sara... lovely write!.. huggs
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Date: 9/4/2014 7:29:00 AM
- Great writing, Sara - (I have to read what the difference between Than-Bauke and Haiku) - Have a nice day - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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