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The Twilight of Reality and Make Believe

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In the twilight~~~~ of reality and make believe~~~ There where dreams hover on the wings of Night And stillness belies the passage of honored TIME There, there in the palm of Eternity we meet We meet in this haven of Tranquility’s b*r*e*a*t*h Perfumed by Love’s signature serene scent These two lovers meticulously bind our naked souls with surreal and real bonds of floral fantasy fusion until...yes...bound until... we are one and the universe is undone In the fluid mixture of homogenous E C S T A C Y ....and.... d^a^z^z^l^i^n^g L I G H T In the twilight~~~ of reality and make believe~~~~ In absence of formulated thought or lived out dream In the nothingness of truth and the perfection of harmony We lie, you and I….. and the moments, the hours, the days, the years and yes….eternity Simply….pass us by…. We lie We sigh We die You and I One In the twilight OF REALITY~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~AND MAKE BELIEVE Eileen Manassian

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/25/2015 9:59:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 8/23/2015 6:24:00 PM
Oooh, I really like this poem..it dazzles the senses!"In absence of formulated thought or lived out dream In the nothingness of truth and the perfection of harmony We lie, you and I….." Beautiful lines.. Always, Laura
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Date: 8/6/2015 7:33:00 AM
My favorite comment here used to describe this piece is Anne Lise's "beautiful and harmonic". Myself I think each of us should add a bit of make believe to our realities so that ordinary lives might become extraordinary.
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Date: 8/5/2015 3:45:00 PM
Hey Eileen, stopped by for a visit and found this amazing work of art from you. Filled with such passion and lovely imagery! Beautifully expressed! Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 8/5/2015 2:56:00 PM
way out of passion's gate, eileen.. enchanted am i!.. huggs
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Date: 8/5/2015 1:59:00 PM
Ethereal in nature and very well written, with strong images and great flow. Your use of colorful scenes adds to the charm and the depth of this work making it delectable. Emile.
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Date: 8/5/2015 12:20:00 PM
- Beautiful and harmonic ...... like a beautiful dream, dear Eileen - (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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