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The Twilight of Memory

Since I did not glance at the passing of my time mirror on the wall I witness a fading frame, all I’ve left is this inside. © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Hansteven Selfa

Date: 12/12/2015 11:03:00 PM

Wondrous. -hansteven

Skat A

Date: 2/11/2014 7:01:00 PM

hello Harry, a sweet twilight memory.. ~ Love ~ SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/19/2014 3:04:00 PM

This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/12/2014 6:04:00 PM

Ahh it speaks to me. a fav! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/12/2014 5:27:00 PM

There is so much to ponder in this thoughtful poem, Harry. Well done, and congratulations on your win!

Joseph May

Date: 1/12/2014 5:03:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Harry

Donna Jones

Date: 1/12/2014 2:36:00 PM

Such an awesome message Harry...congratulations on a wonderful win..

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/12/2014 10:27:00 AM

This one also reads well in reverse order. Congratulations Harry.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/12/2014 6:40:00 AM

Congratulations harry , another one in the pot , well done as always xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/12/2014 12:44:00 AM

Beautiful write on the theme and congrats on the win, harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2014 9:20:00 PM

The last line is just outstanding, Harry. What it says is so true about our lives and the fading. .... the darn fading!!! Congrats. I really liked this.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/2/2014 7:26:00 PM

A short poem that says so much in it's wonderfuul lines, it's hard to get old and it's true that the mirror can be the harished time clock of all, that is the message i got from this honest work. Thank you for your comment on green my friend i wanted it to stand out for the green enviroment. cheri

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 1/1/2014 11:41:00 PM

Wow u r gud at tankas too! Dis was a great poem with a touch of memories musing. Nice to read u. Tnx. Did i read u before?

Kelly Deschler

Date: 12/31/2013 8:21:00 PM

The time goes much faster than we realize! This was very well expressed, Harry. And, I think that we can all relate to this poem. Nicely done!...Thank you for the wonderful comments. I hope that you have a Happy New Year, too!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/30/2013 3:50:00 AM

oh my, you made this swing without using the word twilight and memory... greeat job; wondelrfully conceptualized, harry!... happy new year and huggs

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/29/2013 5:41:00 PM

Hi, Harry.....I'm at a loss for words because I do the same....I wonder where that young girl has gone. Beautiful poem....albeit sad. Hugs

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/29/2013 7:10:00 AM

nothing wrong with the inside harry never judge a book by its cover xx