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The Truth Stood Downcast In the Lie

The truth stood downcast in the lie My eyes tried to whisper But my tongue was tied Because he loved my sister He asked me to introduce them The truth stood downcast in the lie He was my heartbeat and my friend My heart ached, I was about to die Their love grew and blossomed Two souls prancing in bliss The truth stood downcast in the lie Twinge in my eye, I tried to dismiss They took their wedding vows today He was handsome in tux and tie Wished them a world of happiness The truth stood downcast in the lie Written:08/11/2016 Contest: 'The truth stood downcast in the lie' by John Lawless

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Date: 8/12/2016 11:25:00 AM
Well written great poem x I enjoyed reading it x
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/12/2016 1:20:00 PM
Thanks dear Wendy!
Date: 8/11/2016 12:55:00 PM
- A very well written poem, Sara - I wish you every success in the contest, hoping you'll win - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/12/2016 1:20:00 PM
thanks so much Anne-Lise!
Date: 8/11/2016 10:32:00 AM
Lovely write Sara
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/12/2016 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Laura!

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