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The truth stood downcast in the lie; she never thought he'd say goodbye. It all was there in stark, plain sight; the things he did were just not right. His promises made her heart fly... the truth stood downcast in the lie. She thought she was the only one; he swore 'forever'...then was done. His words were gifts for her to hear, allegiance to her loud and clear. The truth stood downcast in the lie; her two-faced liar said goodbye. So easily he said those things that fed the comfort true love brings. But she was blinded, left to sigh... the truth stood downcast in the lie. July 31, 2016 ~4th Place~ Premiere Contest: Contest No. 232 Sponsor: Brian Strand Judged: 11/02/2016 1st Place~ Contest: The Truth Stood Downcast In The Lie Sponsor: John Lawless Judged: 08/26/2016

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Date: 11/3/2016 4:55:00 AM
Many congrats on your win with this sensational poem, Sandra. Lainey
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/3/2016 7:08:00 PM
Thank you very much, Lainey! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/2/2016 8:12:00 PM
Almost forgot
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Date: 11/2/2016 8:11:00 PM
Well written verse about a subject I know well, a 7. Congratulations on your placement.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/3/2016 7:08:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janis, for your supportive and uplifting comment and fine rating! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/27/2016 4:27:00 PM
Excellent and well deserving of the win!! Congratulations..Larry
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Date: 8/27/2016 1:28:00 PM
Congrats on your top win Sandra
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Date: 8/26/2016 11:17:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Sandra! Great job :)
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Date: 8/26/2016 10:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sandra!
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Date: 8/26/2016 7:29:00 PM
Hi Sandra, This was a excellent entry for the contest theme. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. A without doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/26/2016 7:28:00 PM
Wonderful and deserved win, Andrea. Congrats! :-)
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Date: 8/26/2016 5:32:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine interpretation of the prompt, Sandra. It was hard one to meet and you aced it -- Fine Job, Well done
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Date: 8/26/2016 2:26:00 PM
Many congrats on your top spot Sandra your theme suits that line so perfectly:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/26/2016 3:08:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jan. I really like using that form. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/26/2016 12:49:00 PM
Another well deserved top win, congrats Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/26/2016 3:07:00 PM
Thank you very much, John. Sandra
Date: 8/26/2016 10:49:00 AM
Sandra, another winning worthy poem lady! congrats on your top win :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/26/2016 3:07:00 PM
Thank you, Laura. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/26/2016 10:43:00 AM
Congrats on your first place Sandra. Beautiful quatern. :) Sunita
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/26/2016 3:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sunita. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/26/2016 9:41:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/26/2016 3:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sara! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/26/2016 9:22:00 AM
Well done ,as always! Huge Congrats!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/26/2016 2:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sushma! Sandra
Date: 8/26/2016 9:02:00 AM
Sandra, I found this to read smoothly and easily and the repetitive line an invisible heartbeat. Thanks for entering this in the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/26/2016 2:53:00 PM
Thank you so much for the great contest, John. I enjoy writing in the Quatern form. I am honored with my awesome placement, and thank you so much! Sandra
Date: 8/12/2016 3:45:00 PM
A 7 for this excellent quatern, Sandra! Janice
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Date: 8/1/2016 1:41:00 AM
Well written, Sandra:) All the best for the contest:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/2/2016 7:55:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jo. Hugs, Sandra

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