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Entry for contest sponsored by John Lawless

Quatern with first line dictated as "The truth stood downcast in the lie".

 

Written about a person who fell in love with the charm of a sociopath

The truth stood downcast in the lie, A covered up sorrowful sigh, Let out by a stranger who smiled, When noticing feathers all riled; With my shields let down she knew why, The truth stood downcast in the lie, And then she rehearsed ev’ry word, To sharpen her tongue twisting sword; “I love you with all of my heart” She said with finality’s start, The truth stood downcast in the lie, My tears welling up so to cry; For lies told by demons at first, Shall always make tender hearts burst, Her victim now, I wish to die, The truth stood downcast in the lie.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/29/2016 11:52:00 PM
Phillip, I hope you have brighter days. This is so so awesome. I'm giving you a high 7...Skat
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Date: 7/29/2016 11:55:00 PM
That certainly turned my rainy night sunny. Gracias amiga
Date: 7/29/2016 9:55:00 PM
Nice work Phillip, good luck in the contest...
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