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Below is the poem entitled THE TRUE KING OF THE RING which was written by poet dale kruper. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I had a dream I was in a ring,being boxed around by angels wings.
This went on a many times,then it stopped by a beautiful chime.
A sudden great force ushered me to my corner,where I took a minute to sit.
Then once again the chime began and back out I went to get hit.
I was being hit by a flurrryy of wings,when I found myself going down.
When there he was in the middle of the ring,a bearded man in a long white gown.
He counted me out 1,2,3, up to 8,9,10, then told me to rise and kneel before him
and welcomed me to Heaven.

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  1. Date: 10/30/2008 8:35:00 PM
    What did you have to eat before you went to bed?? ... Sorry, but I have to LOL with this one!! I like what you did with the word "flurry" but I don't think it would get past the judges in a contest ... smile ... not that we're just here for contests ... anyway, keep dreaming and writing!!

  1. Date: 9/23/2008 5:11:00 PM
    is the fight your metaphor for all the worldy trials we go through? original