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The Trip To Paradise

On the galley I stood. I could see, a shadowy figure, wearing a black dress and a hood. It’s stories I have heard. Legends of a lifeless captain, his boat and his bird. Fifty-four I was, till the lifeless captain took me in his masterpiece, his work, his canvas, a sea made entirely of us. Wifeless, lifeless, colorless. I was sure it wasn’t alive, he or she, it, moved like a puppet, soulless. Whilst waves of memories hit the prow, the figure proceeded to say: “These memories are you, your friends, your family, I, and where you lay.” The sentence was punctuated by a loud, distant-yet-near screech. A black crow with a silver-like beak could be seen by my curiously intrepid eyes. We reached the docks, and the figure left me beneath the cloudless skies.

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Date: 3/30/2024 6:01:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 1:06:00 AM
AWESOME, POEM
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Date: 9/12/2015 7:27:00 AM
William,, awesome write! I enjoyed reading this poem. Skat
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Date: 6/25/2015 9:13:00 AM
Reminds me of Road to Hell by Chris De Burgh. I could be getting it wrong though......
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