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The Tricksters

Like attracts like, or so they say solitary, the sentinel stood brown and brittle, lifeless Its cracked surface home to many small unfriendly, burrowing, things corpse companions... A raven roosts in its pitch less, upturned arms undeterred by the sharpness of needles long lost to the memory of evergreen winter, untouched by Persephone’s bloom. Death holds sway here. The once noble pine killed by the acid reign of man, now serves only the tricksters, as he flies between worlds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/10/2011 8:24:00 PM
Nice write!
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Date: 5/10/2011 6:50:00 PM
some great imagery and word play in here, Debs, A very profound one for today's world!
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Date: 5/10/2011 5:03:00 PM
It's so sad to see those dead and dying trees. The woodpeckers like em well enough though. My sister had one of these tall once magestic pines...the bark was caked with sap, like it had been crying. A powerful write with amazing metaphors and imagery. Best wishes, Debbie!! Mikki
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Date: 5/9/2011 9:12:00 AM
the use of words really give a nice accent to this " tree" piece, debs... and the flow of polarity is defining with creepy, colorful fantasy. wonderful stuff!... :) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/9/2011 8:56:00 AM
Oooh, this poem is really gripping, Deb. I can see the "cracked surface home" so well as you describe this tree. And then the death of the pine by the acid "reign" of man. Very clever play on words. The Tricksters goes to my favorites, Deb! Awesome statement on environmental neglect. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/9/2011 8:28:00 AM
A definite '10' in a rating scale of only '7' Deb .. awesome first line as one of the blogs just mentioned about the impact of that first line of a poem to begin the reading journey.. powerful and intense my friend.. luv.. from Italy..
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