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The Trees

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The Trees

The Trees Dawn Redwood Golden needles Grace accentuated Bare limbs Hold snow Like loose cloak Spring green comes forth Nest appear in safe place Eggs hatch

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  1. Date: 10/22/2012 2:00:00 AM
    Lovely descriptions Sara! I love the thought of the tree as a haven habitat. Nicely done!

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 10:53:00 AM
    I really think that you are very talented.

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 6:30:00 AM
    I love this one, Sara - I'll have to try this form.

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 12:18:00 AM
    an awesome write friend Sara...i like it. thanks for sharing..Good day always!! :)

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 8:35:00 PM
    A splendid write. Thanks for sharing tonight.

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 11:55:00 AM

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 10:25:00 AM
    You have the ability to create miracles from words. It is a treat to read your poems. Thanks Sara for your most encouraging comments on my poem The Bright Star. You have made my day. You are not only an eminent poet but also a wonderful person. I have to learn much from you. Regards. -Farida

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 5:29:00 AM
    It is so wonderful how this cinqku unravels towards the end building with natural momentum...very nice wk, Sara! Spring will be here in no time...luv, gwendolen

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:42:00 PM
    Nicely written! Love the flow and images!

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 9:07:00 PM
    A splendid succesion of images towards spring! Great idea, Sara! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 6:07:00 PM
    ohh, i like the progression of imagery here, sara, and the final punch of eggs hatching.. baby birds!!... ;) fabulous write!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 5:37:00 PM
    Sara, I'm getting a nice view from here... that tree is very pretty,,, nice way with the expression of an incoming life... xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 3:49:00 PM
    I love the fact that you excelled while using such a difficult form, Cinqku! You did masterfully with this write! I really enjoyed this delightful and fully wondrous poem! What a spectacular piece my friend, Great Work!!