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The Tree Wept

the tree wept tears of loneliness as the apple was plucked 7/8/2017

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/22/2017 6:48:00 PM

Jeremy, I feel sadness for the apple tree. Have a nice evening my friend.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/9/2017 9:03:00 AM

I am of the belief that the apple tree is a cheerful giver, Jeremy:)

Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/9/2017 11:48:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel :) It may be!

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/9/2017 6:39:00 AM

oh this really reaches the reader with a punch of sadness . Well done!

Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/9/2017 11:45:00 AM

Thanks, Heidi :) for the great comment!!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/8/2017 10:41:00 PM

great follow up poem Jeremy:-) hugs Jan xx

Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/8/2017 10:42:00 PM

Thanks, Jan you inspired it ;)