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The Tree Branch Falling

The tree branch falling As I looked out my window I saw you walking Farther and farther away A swan flies over a field

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/24/2009 1:18:00 PM
Nice use of imagery. Interesting presentation of your message. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Have a nice day! Karen
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Date: 3/20/2009 11:13:00 AM
love this!!!
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Date: 3/16/2009 4:03:00 PM
Lovely images....it has elements of a peaceful country scene. ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/16/2009 12:07:00 PM
Nice tanka Jim, I left you some soup mail...Raul
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