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The Tree and the Trigger

When you pulled the trigger you came to me and tried to love me ask my forgiveness, it made me cry, it was so cold I shook with your suffering I drew you in the afterlife alone and crying with gods light asking you to come Your remorse, your shame, a mistake, you had so much to give i painted two trees one that was dying the other was dead the tree loved you amd misses you still

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Date: 12/25/2009 7:55:00 PM
I read this poem two or three times, it keeps drawing me in, an imaginative and it strikes me as a sad write. Interesting work.
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