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The Tree and I

a stirring before words early light through window greenness first without form stillness of a branch the moment the tree and I are one Non Dual Awareness Poetry Contest July 28, 2022

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Valsa George

Date: 8/27/2022 8:41:00 PM

The unity developing inside is so palpable when the scene and the seer become one. Great poem. Congratulations on your win dear Mike.....

Constance La France

Date: 8/16/2022 3:33:00 PM

Mike, great poem and congratulations on your win in the contest, blessings ~Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/15/2022 8:43:00 AM

Short and sweet. Full of philosophy. Congratulations!

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/14/2022 2:41:00 PM

Dear Mike, the contemplative beauty of your poem inspires expanding awareness of unity. Congratulations for your excellent win in Unseeking Seeker’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Rasitha Ranasinghe

Date: 8/14/2022 8:17:00 AM

Wow! Beautiful piece of work. Congratulations on your win

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/14/2022 2:02:00 AM

Brilliant! Congrats on your podium finish Mike, thanks for sharing

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2022 12:13:00 PM

oh wow, you did this contest SO well. Why couldn't I think to do it this way??