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The tree is here, still, in pure stone, as cold as the night that has found me alone No glory to crown, no branch to bend down No cradles for sparrows to shelter their young Not even one leaf to drift in the wind--- Mourning the death, hear the nightingale's song _______________________________ Carrie Richards 7/26//15 For Nette's Contest: Complete These Lines" The tree is here, still in pure stone ....Pablo Neruda

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Date: 8/5/2015 8:29:00 PM
AMAZING!! congrats
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Date: 8/5/2015 12:42:00 AM
breathtaking mood and sullen in theme!..a pleasure to see this in my contest, carrie.. huge congrats !
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:47:00 PM
Very sad and beautiful. Congrats on your win, Carrie! xoxo
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:27:00 PM
I'm sorry, I meant to say CARRIE!! Congrats again!!
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:26:00 PM
Excellent top tier win, dear Andrea! Congrats and a 7 :)
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Date: 8/4/2015 8:25:00 AM
This is a wonderful write and so sad Carrie! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:42:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Carrie! Wonderful imagery!
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:39:00 AM
WOW, Carrie, that is one of the best. Congrats on your win. SKAT
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Date: 8/3/2015 9:13:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/3/2015 2:00:00 PM
Absolutely stunning Carrie - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/3/2015 11:32:00 AM
As I said before, this is a winner, Carrie. Congrats! hugs
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Date: 8/3/2015 8:15:00 AM
CONGRATS CARRIE,,,,,WELL DONE.....
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Date: 7/29/2015 9:16:00 AM
Very glad to have found this beautifully written poem this morn. The image of old , battered and lonesome blasts out as it is read. You may like to read my recent poem about a tree, one my childhood depended. A7, truly a great poem my friend.
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Date: 7/27/2015 12:30:00 PM
What can I say my friend? Every line is a work of art, and the last says SO very much to me...Yes indeed, in spite of death the nightingale still sings on her branches...
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Date: 7/26/2015 7:33:00 PM
Lovely, CArrie. Another winner here. hugs!
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