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Inspirational Credit: Thanks to Madeleine Bianchi for inspiring my writing here and inspiring myself and many others to appreciate ALL the creatures and life we humans are blessed with having to "share" our planet, Earth, with, through her gorgeous photos.

But humans are arrogant, selfish, and greedy. The words 'intelligent' and 'humans' do not fit in the same sentence, without being an oxymoron. Humans profusely pollute the air with carbon dioxide especially, which is destroying our protective ozone layer and then, instead of protecting our trees and forests, the main source for filtering out the carbon dioxide and for providing us the oxygen acutely crucial for our own and all living creatures' survival, we humans destroy the trees and forests and not for need, but for greed. Where exactly does 'intelligence' fit into this stupid equation?

"The Tree" How magnificent is The Tree, so stately, standing tall, Sustaining of earth's life, both of large and of small. Majestic, strong, yet grown, from a wee, tiny seed, The main supplier of what all we humans need. But besides our oxygen, The Tree does provide An air filtering system by using carbon dioxide. The Tree takes away the toxins for our care And then gives us back cleaner, fresher air. Also in this process, our blanket of protection, The Tree keeps in place for harmful ray rejection. The Tree is a fortress, especially in number And too, provides shade, cool in to slumber. Many species rely on our humbly vital tree For food, a home, safety against forces that may be. But mankind is arrogant, with self as its bride; Human satisfaction's sought, gained by ego fed pride. So, how grateful are we humans for The Tree? We humans chop it down without thought, carelessly. Every tree we cut, bring to the ground, We're reducing oxygen needed all around. But worse, instead of only taking just what we need, We humans are insatiable, driven by our greed. Not only do we take, but we fail to replace All we steal from life across our earth's face. The Tree, once reigning king of the forest and the land, Is treasured by species many, but not by human hand. The Tree's vital role in jeopardy of being lost, If humans don't awaken, our death will be the cost. Our sustaining breath of life, maintainer of our shield, We humans of no respect, against with axes, wield. When mankind sees dollar signs, it's common sense, "So long!" Justifying the lust for money, knowing full well it is wrong. The majestic tree, once supreme, so stately and so tall, With human slaying massively, we purposely befall, The Tree's survival but our own extinction's guaranteed, All for ignorance and stupidity, and for human's evil greed. Written by Artsieladie/Sharon Donnelly ©2015-08-20 02:50:00 (EST) All rights reserved.

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Date: 6/21/2018 9:55:00 AM
Very well written, Artsie. I love trees! I have planted nearly 100 on my property. Unfortunately, greed is the driving force of civilization!
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Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly
Date: 6/21/2018 10:22:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel, and for sharing. That's great. I like hearing about folks planting trees. :) I too, love trees. I used to have a lawn. Then trees took root and grew. Now, less lawn, more trees and this is fine by me. Money's not the root of all evil. It's the lust for money that is. :( May you have a nice day. :) ~ Artsie
Date: 6/21/2018 6:09:00 AM
Sharon.. Enjoyed reading your work this morning, a terrific write.. in fact the best I've read this morning. I also liked you including all these background notes and credits!
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Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly
Date: 6/21/2018 10:03:00 AM
Thank you, Lyric Man, for dropping by this morning with your kinds words and noting my notes and credits. May your day be a pleasant one. :) ~ Artsie
Date: 6/21/2018 2:02:00 AM
Well said Artsie, greed overcomes their judgement and slowly our beautiful planet is being destroyed, animals driven to extinction, forests flattened for development. Man will cause his own destruction because he's a master at it.fools. Tom
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Date: 6/21/2018 2:32:00 AM
Human greed infuriates me. 'Intelligence may be good but wisdom is the jewel that humans can't behold when greed is the fuel.' (AL quote) I like your last sentence b/c it really is true but a very sad truth. Thanks Tom for your added words of wisdom. Have a pleasant day. :) ~ Artsie

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