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Her eyes look wide and clear around Cast there are shadows of the fog igniting night As she sees an image on a wet neglected window pane It holds her in contempt Cold, damp, with sweat, shivering in fright And nothing can save her from herself Or the 32 fluid ounces of rain still pounding down Outside, trying to get in is sanity To get at her with anger in the minute Separated in the thinnest infinity Seen through dark matter madness In her mind glass shatters from the past to now Windows shake, her hands as well Like unnerved paranoids trying to get free Waiting for the very air to attack she sits Like a burnt out fuse in pain Cowering on the growling floor Nothing but a soul can save her Something she could never have Or purchase at the store for currency As the storm advances Every rain drop must be counted Saved for a day she can't remember Crawling on the floor She slithers to the window pane Every second must be saved Electrified and drowning in her tears That evaporate like mist in to the void Her mind erases every thought into the glass Turns inside out reflecting Enveloped by fear the rain remains When the door bell rings Nothing will be the same 12/15/14 entry for Carol Eastman's "Best of 2014" - Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/29/2014 11:54:00 AM
Great choice for Best 2014 poem. Congratulations on your win Earl. I'm glad I got the chance to read this Brilliantly written poem.
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Date: 12/29/2014 4:37:00 PM
Hi Brenda, Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. I enjoyed your interesting entry in this contest. Congratulations to you too on your excellent win. Earl
Date: 12/26/2014 10:15:00 PM
EARL, Awesome Best of 2014 poem, and win.... Congrats.... Linda
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Date: 12/27/2014 4:30:00 AM
Hi Linda, Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. It is one of my darkest poems. I'm not sure why I chose it as one of my best. I did struggle with it over many rewrites so maybe I have a certain attachment to it. It has turned into one of my personal favorites. Have a wonderful day. Earl
Date: 12/19/2014 10:22:00 AM
Way to go..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 12/19/2014 11:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara. I appreciate your commenting. Congratulations to you too on your interesting poem and excellent win. Have a great week end. Earl
Date: 12/18/2014 8:12:00 AM
This is a very deep write. I need to read it another 20 or 100 times. I am like that. I love reading a piece to soak it dry of every meaning whether intentional or unintentional by the writer. These for me are the most interesting of writes.
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Date: 12/18/2014 8:41:00 AM
Hi Maurice, Thank you so much for your kind words. Congratulation to you too on your brilliant Lennon poem and excellent win. Have a great day. Earl
Date: 12/18/2014 8:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/18/2014 4:56:00 AM
Nice flow of the words, congratulations on the win, Earl
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Date: 12/18/2014 8:07:00 AM
Hi Dr. Mehta, Thank you so much for commenting. Congratulations to you too on your excellent win in the contest. Take it easy. Earl
Date: 12/17/2014 5:00:00 PM
Brilliant Earl - I like your free style. Congrats in Carol's contest
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Date: 12/17/2014 6:33:00 PM
Hi Mark, Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Have a great evening. Earl
Date: 12/17/2014 4:14:00 PM
Hi Vicki, Thank you so much. I enjoyed your beautiful poem also. Congratulations to you too on your excellent win. Earl
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Date: 12/17/2014 12:57:00 PM
incredibly dramatic Earl - so please you entered this one for me to enjoy reading:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 12/17/2014 2:21:00 PM
Hi Jan, I am very happy that you enjoyed this. It is cohesive and applicable for a contest. I personally like it and enjoy it. It does conjure up specific deranged elements of life. It was a complicated write for me but I liked every minute of it. It was between this and "Vase Dream" as an entry. Thanks again. Take care and have a wonderful day. Earl
Date: 5/24/2014 10:54:00 PM
Congratulations Earl .....Seren
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Date: 5/26/2014 8:50:00 AM
Hi Seren! Thank you for commenting. I truly appreciate it. Take care. Earl
Date: 5/23/2014 6:10:00 AM
Very dramatic writing, Earl. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie
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Date: 5/23/2014 10:14:00 AM
Hi Lainie, I wanted this poem to have a poignant edge. I hope you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading it. I truly appreciate your comments. Take care. Earl

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