The Tranquil and Strong

Through all life's seasons The tranquil, the strong, survive Fed by mountain streams

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2010 12:35:00 PM

LOve it, Audrey!! WAs it based on that one contest with the picture? I didn't score in that one. It sure is hit and miss with these contests, don't ya think? LUv, andrea

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/17/2010 10:23:00 AM

I love this, Audrey. It's splendid. Very inspirational and great imagery in this well written Haiku. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.

Richard Pickett

Date: 4/17/2010 9:15:00 AM

I can see this one...Well done..Audrey...I like it...God Bless..Taz

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/17/2010 5:38:00 AM

You've named it in this Haiku, Audrey! Strong means to be tranquil, isn't it? Enjoyed this Haiku of yours very much. Haiku and Senryu in Japan are always combiney with some watercolor paintings, a pity that we are not able to post also pics on PS! Thank you for your kind comments...Love, Gert

Skat A

Date: 4/16/2010 5:54:00 PM

Love it, Audrey it sounds like a beauty in life. Hey I' ve Maries BB f . For 3 mo's. It is cool that she is makeing it grow. C U later at the soup.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/16/2010 11:19:00 AM

A beauty for the new contest... good luck dear BBF ... our "club" is growing rapidly as everyone wants to know what BBF means and can they be one... appreciate your special comments to but I did not receive your e mail ... send again ... and keep watching for Pendulum ... trying to get it posted sometime today... luv.. BBF.. Linda-Marie

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/16/2010 10:48:00 AM

Oh, I like this one....the law of nature, where the strong survives! Well done, Audrey! ~ Carrie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/16/2010 10:07:00 AM

Nice one, enjoyed Audrey