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The Train Whistle

When I’m drifting softly to sleep I often hear a faint sound from across the valley, the whistle from a passing train, mysterious and lonely. In my mind’s eye I can see its shadow plunging into the darkness.. Only the wind left in its wake. It takes part of my heart on its journey. A lonely child played on the tracks Arms outstretched, balancing.. bowing. The old station..castle, fortress, friend. Dreams of far away places and adventures.. In passing, a hand raised in greeting..a gift to savor when twilight called me home. Now, when I hear the glorious whistle I pause to remember, in a way to grieve the past.. and in perhaps, on occasion, the present. The train rumbled on…..into the night. written in 09

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/1/2013 5:46:00 PM
When I am drifting softly to sleep? I have already slept, Barbara. Enough reminiscing! Thank you for the richness of it all.
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Date: 6/6/2013 10:25:00 AM
you take me back here with this wonderful poetry,, thank you
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Date: 6/2/2013 3:13:00 PM
I just loved the wistfulness about it.
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Date: 6/2/2013 3:12:00 PM
wow, this is the BEST of the ones I just read. a fave for this one!!!
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Date: 6/2/2013 6:05:00 AM
......and rumble on it does until it rumbles no more. great poem, barbara. it's been 50 yrs. since I rode a train but this write reminded me of those times. randy
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Date: 6/1/2013 8:16:00 PM
This is hauntingly beautiful Barbara. I really enjoyed it...love,Deb
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