Get Your Premium Membership

The Tornado Came Towards Noon

Adele thought that it was going to be a lovely Fall morning, and getting off her bed like a sleepwalker who missed a step, she stumbled fearing she would fall, and peaking through the clear window she saw a sun-blazed cloud that floated high and low, and with no hint of danger from a peaceful sky, she returned to her bed humming a song to her son who was soundly sleeping. Adele had gotten up late, her boy had a fever and his body was hot, she watched him closely missing out on needed sleep as worry crossed her freckled face but making plans had to wait; a strange thud she heard...something had fallen off her top closet shelf, she thought it was over-packed and didn't bother to check... a minute passed, and a jolt rattled the wall facing her baby. Panic triggered fear, a fear that never had entered her naive mind: it couldn't have been an earthquake...California was far and she lived on Long Island, then again she realized that earthquakes can strike anywhere, anytime; and expecting the worse, she grabbed her infant as the tornado smashed her window; the incredible thrust lifted them up five feet off their bed, she held on dear life: luckily they were pushed down by the gravity force, and lived to see tomorrow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/13/2014 9:34:00 PM
Andrew... Nice seeing your poem featured on the poetry soups home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Login to Reply
Date: 5/13/2014 5:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Andrew
Login to Reply
Date: 5/6/2014 12:07:00 PM
Wow this poem gets you very powerful well done Andrew well done!-Love Ettie
Login to Reply
Date: 5/6/2014 12:06:00 PM
What a marvellously penned write! I kept reading till the end. Highly recommended poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/30/2014 7:21:00 PM
splendid tale well done, andrew!.. sweet congrats on your shining win!.. huggs
Login to Reply
Date: 4/30/2014 7:55:00 AM
Wonderful write Andrew ! Congrats on great win !
Login to Reply
Date: 4/30/2014 2:10:00 AM
Great write on Rock My world contest. Congrats on the win. Andrew
Login to Reply
Date: 4/29/2014 8:07:00 PM
Hi Andrew, a xool rocking poem... Congrats in D G.'s contest.... Linda
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs