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Below is the poem entitled THE TORNADO which was written by poet Victoria Oliver. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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destruction lies in its wake
matchbox houses whirled about
we huddle in our bathtub
and wait for the train

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  1. Date: 6/28/2012 5:16:00 AM
    yeah,very scary.Clear in four lines

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 8:19:00 PM
    Scary situation. Wonderful tanka. I really like your last line. Great work. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 3:50:00 PM
    An ominous picture you have penned. Peace and blessings.