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The Toilet Two Step

I know it’s coming that urge the pressure to perform on queue a conga line of the incontinent living the Maxwell House dream “good to the last drop”. We wait in shuffling silence knowing that when the dance is over we’ll be going home alone. 7/9/2021 The Last Dance Poetry Contest

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/13/2021 5:33:00 PM

You've given 'good to the last drop' a whole new meaning here, John. ~ Hershey Squirts

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2021 1:49:00 PM

wow, this is REALLY good. So creative. I am jealous I did not think of it

Jan Allison

Date: 7/9/2021 5:05:00 PM

ha ha ha I have seen so many kids perform the wet knicker dance i did a poem about it lol:-) thanks for the giggle John we need more humour on soup:-) hugs Jan xx