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The Time : a Precious Gold

Life's important tool is time It's value in life is prime, Time is a precious gold which makes us quiet bold, Time gives us full strength which holds our life's length, Time can heal all wounds & takes hundred of rounds, Time makes us very strong & blessed us to live long, Life's important tool is time it's value in life is prime, Time says truth of life who've blessings & who've knife, Time gives us bunch of responsibility which we've to done with full ability, Time can take our test-on-test in which we've to do our best, Time says us last 'hiiii' & we're giving a peaceful 'bye'.

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Date: 10/11/2016 11:19:00 AM
Interesting combination of words. I also like writing couplets and sonnets. I am not that perfect but feel free to read my poems and you may leave a comment if you want. It will be nice hearing from you.
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Date: 9/15/2016 11:30:00 PM
AMIT D, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/13/2016 3:47:00 PM
Amit D.,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/11/2016 10:17:00 AM
Amit, Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Date: 9/11/2016 9:50:00 AM
Beautiful praise of time! Sunita :)
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