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The Time

We should have taken the time 
to look upward and around;

We did too much, it was too 
To reverse the damage, 
close the gate

Simple living, just too complex;
Simple gifts we squandered 

I hope you take the chance to 
To learn from our history

Taste the joy all around, 
Take care of the planet 

Do what we did not,
We should have taken the time

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  1. Date: 1/8/2013 2:42:00 PM
    MELANI, , stopping by to say hi and read your winning poem in CATIE'S ""Message in a Bottle "'' contest~ nice poem to read. have yourself a good day. always & forever ~LINDA

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 8:16:00 PM
    ONe of my favorites! Congrats. BG

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 7:32:00 PM
    Melani, congrats ~SKAT

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 11:27:00 AM
    I really like yours a lot. It is to the point and very well said. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 5:07:00 AM
    Congratulations on you winning spot Melani love xx

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 4:29:00 AM
    Congratulations, Melanie, on your win in my contest! hugs, Catie :)