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The Tightest Hold

This tight hold Began when some small part of my semi-present brain said “Yes.” Your fierce, tender, electrifying embrace is Sometimes the cozy place I retreat to when the world jeers and Sometimes a cold non-place I ignore But always surrounding me. You are always there. In your death, you tied yourself to me, And wherever my fragile fingers push or pull, You are unmoveable.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/14/2011 9:44:00 PM
Hi there Caitlin. I enjoyed your poem and especially the way it drew me in little by little to the last line--which is really powerful. Cheers, Soulfire
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