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The Tide of Time

Washed up on the shore broken by the ocean's roar waiting at the foot of heavens door I touch her fading beauty with my trembling hand a broken shell lying in the burning sand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 10/18/2014 5:38:00 AM
I love the texture of your poem's content, together with your structuring. I also applaud you for being featured in PS's homepage! ^_^
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Date: 10/15/2014 10:48:00 PM
Great write...loved the creative display :) An
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Date: 10/13/2014 7:56:00 PM
At the heaven's door,are there doors?a thoughtful creation.
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Date: 10/13/2014 11:11:00 AM
Human or fish, makes no difference, Lanie. I love it. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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