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The Thoughts That Haunt Me

Should I have worn more makeup or better clothes? Should I have done different with my hair or painted my toes? Should I have stopped eating to get a little smaller or maybe worn some heels to be a little taller? Should I have talked a little more or maybe a little less or walked a little different or worn a different dress? These are the thoughts that haunt me each and every day. What could u have done different to make him look my way? I look at him he looks past me, I see him but he doesn't see me. I beg of you please want me as much as I want you, I beg of you please see me the way that I see you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/28/2015 8:54:00 PM
Hi Lacey, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/27/2015 9:51:00 PM
Lacey, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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