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"come fluttering words, come drifting words to me . . . a Rambling Poet." The rising sun, shone into her room takes a moment, to gather her thoughts gowns her morning attire with pride moves into her garden,astonishing nature Song birds and Sky Larks, fill her ears with music the morning air, so pure into her lungs last nights proposal, from her childhood sweetheart dwelling but, knowing what her answer will be Life feeling exhilerating, future so bright as the perfumed rose plant, poised on her sill her futre holds happiness,children, how many ? her husband to be, awaits her response. Sponsor Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~ Contest What is she thinking . . Wounds by wayside. P. Beadnall... 16/7/11

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Date: 7/28/2011 1:11:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Constance,Paul
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Date: 7/28/2011 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your special poem placing in Constance La France's "What is she thinking" contest Paul. Love, Carol
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 7/28/2011 8:01:00 AM
Cheers Carol,always appreciated blessings Paul
Date: 7/27/2011 11:52:00 PM
Congrats Paul on an amazing win with awesome lines of poetic art luv..
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 7/28/2011 6:17:00 AM
THANK YOU very much Linda - Marie,appreciated ..BLESSINGS Paul
Date: 7/21/2011 9:16:00 AM
terrific mate...deserves the best.........Jack
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Date: 7/21/2011 7:17:00 AM
It is so hot here in Ohio the last few days and they say stay in if you can. Well I can and so I thought this would be a wonderful day to thank everyone for their kind comments on my poetry. So I say thank you to you for the kind words and for sharing your amazing poetry with us Paul. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2011 3:19:00 PM
amazingly beautiful Paul.. good luck in the contest luv.. this is a breathtaking write on the theme and photo luv.. enjoyed.. my entry is Wounds by Wayside.. tragic ..but hopefully good enough to win..
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Date: 7/16/2011 10:09:00 AM
enchanting, romantic,fantasy,joy,feelings abound,mysterious. I really like this Poem! terrific write. best of Luck in the contest...My regards
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