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The Things I'Ve Seen

Sitting all alone on a dark and dead end street With trash and cigarette butts blowing at my feet Thinking about the goals in life that I didn't meet And the few promises made that I wasn't able to keep I then saw a man on the curb right across from me So I decided to get up to go see just who he may be He said "Well you finally came" on his face was a big smile "I've been waiting right here for you for quite a long while" Still not sure who he was I offerd my hand to help him up When he gripped onto my hand I felt my body become filled with love I said"Oh my Lord!" he smiled and said,"Yes it is me" "I'm here to show you a few things I feel you need to see" He started with a mother and child, living on the street Begging for a little change just to get some food to eat A polution filled sky with a bright sun no one could see With all these toxins in the air blowing and floating free A field full of dead animals with a stench of rot that filled the air All thrown there by children who killed them without even a care Sewage flowing into the water from which the people drink No one even caring about what's giving it that little stink A mountin size landfill that can be seen from afar No one even noticing it while passing in their car Then we stopped and he said, "Now listen to me my son," "I want you to fix some of these wrongs that the people have done" Not even sure of how or where it is that I should start I'm starting with these words that were placed within my heart Hoping to find other people in this world with feelings the same as me Who want to change some of these wrongs that we all neglect to see Dan Kearley:10-30-11 :o(

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Date: 3/17/2015 12:25:00 AM
Powerful stuff, great write. Things we all need to see.
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Date: 2/17/2014 4:27:00 PM
Hi Danny; Congratulations on this poem. I enjoyed reading very much. A lot of things need changing, but we all need to pitch in. Great poem.... Lucilla
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Date: 2/17/2014 8:07:00 AM
fantastic pen Dan we do need to open our eyes well written and congrats on being featured lovely write hug
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Date: 11/17/2011 6:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Give Me Your Best Shot" contest Dan. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/14/2011 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John Freeman, Dan
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Date: 11/13/2011 8:30:00 PM
We have to start somewhere. Who knows, our words may even inspire us to do more. Great work Dan. lCongratulations
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Date: 11/13/2011 6:30:00 PM
Dan this was a great poem, I loved it, check your soup mail a bit later. Congratulations on a great poem win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/12/2011 7:39:00 AM
Dan, this is just lovely and meaningful. I, too, struggle with the "where-to-starts." For me, it's a do-what-you-can, where-you-can and when-you-can without beating up on myself with guilt. Before my girl was born, I was a part of the environmental committee at the church, mostly about educating on better choices. Now, I struggle with just gettin' the recycling done! Sheesh. One typo I noticed that you may wish to fix, I think you meant You finally came, not finely came (though fine's fine):-)
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/12/2011 11:00:00 AM
Thank you very much! I can't believe I didn't see that?Finally fixed :-) If you should ever come across any mistakes in my works.Please let me know....Much appresh :-)
Date: 11/7/2011 2:43:00 PM
Don't listen to JIFFY PoP Cohen, This poem is right ON TIME Bro!
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/7/2011 4:00:00 PM
Ha ha Thanks alot! I'm glad you stopped by.
Date: 11/3/2011 10:04:00 PM
Quite obviously, you are a very fine poet!! How inspiring - I love this poem! So clear and visual, sparking the senses with curiosity and awe. I am glad your mind and heart decided to pour all of these random words to fill in such a classic, poignant and expressive work of art. :--) Always, Laura
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/4/2011 10:23:00 AM
Well thank you very much.. :-)
Date: 10/31/2011 6:09:00 AM
when you speak the words your god-forsken god said to you those words are exactly where i live now, only thing is you may be your lord's son but i am the most heinois of sons Satan's ever had--your poetry is getting better but some of it is forced and i advised you to edit, read it again and edit again...read it now and see the mistakes....your fiend ~free cee!~ Phreepoetree
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Cyndi Macmillan
Date: 11/12/2011 7:34:00 AM
"Fiend", indeed
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/4/2011 10:22:00 AM
I changed what I felt needed to be changed.Thanks for your comments.
Date: 10/30/2011 7:38:00 PM
Dan your poem made me cry. I want to add you as a fav poet. I hope that is okay
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Dan Kearley
Date: 10/30/2011 7:42:00 PM
I would be honored :-)
Date: 10/30/2011 7:00:00 PM
Well Dan, you've uncovered a lot of sadness in this verse and certainly we have made a mess of things but is it too late. Your message is timely and surely we could all make an effort.
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Dan Kearley
Date: 10/30/2011 7:25:00 PM
Right? :-)
Date: 10/30/2011 6:27:00 PM
Wow, Dan. Let's do it, ok? Namaste~N
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Dan Kearley
Date: 10/30/2011 6:35:00 PM
OK :-) :-) :-) Let's Do It!

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