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The Temple of the Butterfly

I am the void I am the wrath I am the undulating sun seraph In the temple of the butterfly The shadow is my alibi ~moths, in rooms full of angles circle, languishing slow as death caught in webs of cold breath rage beneath the deep shade of insentient truth ~moths, numberless toil wings beating back the night sinew pulling muscle, flexing flight fly into the brooding canon, luminous, hungry ~moths, consuming dark that vision of ourselves, vacant grief haunting voice, distant hymn deep cadence held in solemn silence ~moths, numberless spiral descend from smoke through slanting light disturbing silence, spirits fall in waves breaking upon the consciousness of eternal human sorrow I am the dark I am the dream I am the madness in-between In the temple of the butterfly The shadow is my alibi

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Date: 1/19/2024 1:37:00 PM
A wonderful piece, Mat. I can hear the English accent revealing the poem, sounds chilling--a purgatory of a sort.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/19/2024 2:43:00 PM
thank you, anaya
Date: 1/17/2024 6:28:00 AM
Oh my! This resonates so strongly with me and is definitely one of the best ive read from you, in my eyes, for the metaphors and the way you’ve delivered this in such a moving manner: i especially love “ I am the dark I am the dream I am the madness in-between“ so good! So touching and so powerful! Love the slight alliterations too flowing so seamlessly! A fave it is! Pleasure reading this poetic gem
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/17/2024 7:52:00 AM
thank you for the kind comments - my gratitude
Date: 1/14/2024 3:50:00 PM
Very powerful and dark and true to its heaviness.... the image of the moths in the butterlfies' temple, circling...shadow's alibi.. to... the butterfly's hope. ? .. your 'cadence' really was enthralling.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/15/2024 1:09:00 PM
i appreciate the response paige
Date: 1/14/2024 1:01:00 PM
So profound and elegantly poetic
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/15/2024 1:09:00 PM
thank you andrea
Date: 1/14/2024 4:51:00 AM
Woah, this is such a deeply vulnerable and dark write, written in a very impactful way.. It's really painstaking when our souls become a void where only wrath lives and every ray of hope has extinguished.. I can feel the aching essence of these words.. Yet, you've conveyed your thoughts so powerfully! I love your wordplay here and especially the poetic creativity that has been showcased in these soul stirring lines.. Brilliant work!
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/15/2024 1:08:00 PM
very much appreciated
Date: 1/14/2024 3:38:00 AM
Dark and emotive... you have an amazing way with words and how to describe how you feel..
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/15/2024 1:08:00 PM
thank you for the time

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