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The Tears of Our Fathers

Tears of our fathers of old A silent cry through whips of toil In rain and in the frozen cold They work the harvest of the soil. Tears of our fathers of old The men that lapped the morsels The tasteless bread of mold A fitting feast to mongrels. As if joy was a distant glow Or freedom,infinite moons away Death's heartless striking blow Was a sweet and wonderous day. At the cruel hands of the overseers Their sorrows renewed each day A beast of labour in many tears In the stinging sparkling ray. Through history's ruthless pages Forlorn are memories that gathers Through the past century stages The tears of our fathers!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/2/2016 4:18:00 PM
I couldn't analyze the poem's meaning could someone explain it to me?
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Shalyssa Blake
Date: 2/22/2017 6:21:00 PM
it means that this father is a slave and he works very hard so he can stay alive by obeying his master so called the (White Man)
Date: 1/15/2014 7:49:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your very expressive work..I don't know how our ancestors survived whatever their circumstances..Live was very hard in the olden days and live is still hard in many areas of the world..Great speaking about one aspect of the past..Thanks for your visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/25/2013 9:37:00 PM
Very well expressed. I believe that you as a poet stand amongst the best.
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Date: 7/26/2013 3:44:00 PM
Very well done ;}
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/19/2013 9:44:00 AM
Thank you Debbie for your kind review.
Date: 6/25/2013 6:39:00 AM
Very touching.....and it crosses many lines of division.. You are special, my friend.... Jake
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 7/5/2013 6:23:00 PM
Thank you my friend Jake.So nice to hear from you buddy.
Date: 6/17/2013 12:18:00 PM
I hear there crys,,, screaming from this beautiful, write!!! Fabulous work M, another outstanding piece to meditate on...onelove,, cherie..
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 7/5/2013 6:17:00 PM
Thank you my dear Cherry
Date: 6/17/2013 10:40:00 AM
Full of many tears from our fathers. Mohammed, Another great poem as usual. This is my only suggestion
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 7/5/2013 6:15:00 PM
Thank you James,most appreciated.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 7/5/2013 6:11:00 PM
Thank you James,most appreciated.
Date: 6/17/2013 8:09:00 AM
This is an outstanding piece of work M.M. Very well expressed. Well done.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 7/5/2013 6:08:00 PM
Thank you very much champ.
Date: 6/17/2013 5:20:00 AM
- Touching and beautifully written to your father, Mustapha ! - Well done - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/17/2013 6:12:00 AM
Thank you dear one,nice of you to leavea lovely comment..xoxox

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