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The Tears

I just stay sitting here waiting for the tears to stop running down my face all of them in a race to see who which one will reach my heart first to see how much it hurts hoping to mend the break and pool together like a lake and comfort but its too late to stop the pain only the he could create by making me second best to all of the rest how can I compete with what I can't defeat what I can't be that only he can see I wish I could find the key to open doors so he could see who I am but only he can make himself be happy with me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/11/2010 3:20:00 AM
The last three lines say it all..Sometimes these people are not worth the salt in your tears..There is the person out there that will love you with the love that you are worthy of receiving from life..Enjoyed your work..Sara
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Date: 7/25/2010 6:14:00 AM
WOW, amazing write !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 7/24/2010 9:41:00 PM
wonderfully written
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