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As I step on the threshold through a dense cloud of dust there's a moment I'm swept back, walking deep into trust To the arms of a childhood that never grows old and where the cold of an attic, is warmed by the past I remember the sun, and the man in the moon and the sandman who comes on a hot afternoon I remember small teeth, tucked under pillows, a dime and a wish, and a doll by the window There's a world under oils, and a friend to play house What brims with contentment, and worries are few a delicate balance of color and hue The old man, the child,… whoever they are in a moment so charming, of sweet tapestry A bewildering childhood, beguiling, the view on the doorstep of daydreams, with a small cup of tea A flight of the fancy, in ginger-ale eyes unfolds all the flowers, of 'let's pretend' rhymes I navigate hallways, and warm afternoons for I am the grandchild, and he is the moon The dance of the tea-cups, the fairyland shelves I've entered a time-warp in spite of myself The love of all love, is an old man who shares a small cup of tea, filled of vaporized air As light as a feather, the world in our arms sipping on tea in a world without harm
~ The Painting : "If Wrinkles Must Be Written On Our Brow Let Them Not Be Written" Painting By Morgan Weistling 5/6/16 Contest: Within A Gilded Frame Sponsor: Broken Wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/7/2016 9:08:00 AM
A bit late but congrats x
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Date: 5/20/2016 6:45:00 AM
Awesome and refreshing. A jaw breaking 7.
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Date: 5/13/2016 11:58:00 AM
Deserving win Carrie, congratulations...
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Date: 5/13/2016 9:43:00 AM
So enchanting,congrats Carrie!
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Date: 5/13/2016 9:36:00 AM
Absolutely lovely Carrie, it is such a gentle imaginative write that reads very smoothly.
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Date: 5/13/2016 2:23:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome win, in Broken Wing's contest... LINDA
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Date: 5/13/2016 1:56:00 AM
Very beautiful poem on the pic. Congrats on your great win, Carrie.
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Karam Misra
Date: 5/13/2016 1:58:00 AM
And thank you for introducing me to Ekphrasis!
Date: 5/13/2016 1:05:00 AM
lovely write and a nice pic congrats
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Date: 5/12/2016 11:19:00 PM
Lovely write, Carrie, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/6/2016 11:35:00 PM
Love this beautiful, soft-caressing and touching poem. Excellent ...7 ... CayCay
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Date: 5/6/2016 1:05:00 PM
Carrie, you have captured the essence of love between a grandfather and granddaughter in this charming painting, so wonderfully. This is sure to do well in the contest. I don't know your exact birthday, but I know it is sometime this month of May, so I want to wish you the happiest of birthdays my friend! #7 ; ) Love, Connie
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Carrie Richards
Date: 5/6/2016 1:09:00 PM
Omy goodness.....what a keen memory you have, dear Connie! Thank you so much for remembering, and always especially for your kindness and kind comments! Thank you !!

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