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The Taylor House Story (Tanka Sextet)

There's always a house Some weird vacant residence Kids stay away from Especially on certain nights Those nights when the Moon is bright Climbing those porch steps Would take more than just courage No child would risk it It's the Taylor House Story A tale both true and GORY! The house I describe Has three stories a long porch And boarded windows Except for one by the top gable 'Death's Door' so goes the fable No boards on this one No glass either just splinters Three jagged sabres It's said a boy in his teens Stuck in his head - GUILLOTINED! Now! On moonlit nights Some still hear those awful thumps The window comes down THUMP! His head hits the roof THUMP! Rolls on down hits the ground THUMP! Well? To climb those steps? It would be insanity No child would risk it A vision so full of dread That thumping bouncing DEAD HEAD!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/10/2012 8:03:00 PM
lovely poem Daver and congrats on being selected.. patrick
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Date: 3/5/2012 6:30:00 PM
Congrats Daver on your story being featured. When we were kids we had stories to scare the younger ones. This was a great poem and FUN!
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Date: 6/24/2011 2:04:00 PM
I found this un-nerving, until the last line, Daver. Anyone would be scared out of their wits, knowing this tale. The last line, well I suppose I needed to giggle, as comic relief. On the other hand, that place would freak me out!! Best wishes, Love, Mikki
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Date: 5/27/2010 10:55:00 PM
dead head. hahaha. Isn't that the name of a rock group or something? And this POEM ROCKS. I love this kind, Daver. a great and fun read. LUv, andrea
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Date: 7/9/2009 11:30:00 AM
Is this the house you were talking about? Wonderful horror story, and I think every kid knows a house in their town! Great poem Daver! ~Trudy~
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Date: 9/14/2008 8:06:00 AM
Daver, Your poem The Taylor House Story paints a horrid picture, a really scary picture. The Thumps part of it is draconian and terrorizing. You have successfully painted the weirdness in words. An excellent write. Thanks for compliments paid to my poem The Sound of Silence. God Bless you. Mohammad
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Date: 9/13/2008 1:15:00 PM
this sounds scary to me, I felt as if I was there, but I am like the kids I would not go in there either, thanks for your welcome comments, take care D-nyce
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Date: 9/13/2008 7:22:00 AM
funny "his head" funny i'm still smilling JHL
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Date: 9/13/2008 1:03:00 AM
Daver - a very interesting poem that was very well written and held my complete interest through out - Great job and God Bless
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Date: 9/12/2008 6:38:00 PM
EEEWWWWW! Nothing says scared like the sound of a dead head rolling, rolling, rolling off the shingles! Yikes! So good and scary - love it! I agree...more! LOVE halloween! Kristin
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Date: 9/12/2008 2:49:00 PM
OMG Loved it! Can't wait to see what you come up with for Halloween. Especially love the scary stories with kids involved. I'm a huge horror fan, well minus the gore. This wasn't too bad, gore wise. It was AWESOME! ~lol~ More, please. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/12/2008 10:13:00 AM
You gave me shivers!!!!! As I reached the end, my eyes widened with fear...YIKES!!!!I hope I can sleep....lol...tc...Sara...
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Date: 9/12/2008 6:46:00 AM
This reminds me of the kids in "To Kill A Mockingbird". Terrific movie....terrific poem! ~ Carrie
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