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The Taste of Freedom

I got a taste of freedom it lasted a little while. I got a glimpse of how it felt to see the sun and smile. It reminded me of who I was someone I'd lost along the way, felt good to step inside her head oh I wish that I could stay. But the sky is getting darker black clouds again descend and I go back to living numb with a smile that's pretend. With reluctance I must step back to my cage once more but now I feel the pain much greater as I watch its closing door. So while I tasted freedom it is something bitter sweet for now it's gone, the darkness feels heavy with defeat. April 1 2011

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Date: 4/6/2011 8:06:00 PM
This is such a heartfelt piece Emma, and I really liked how this one flowed so well-- I can relate to this to some point, too-- you are so right freedom is indeed bittersweet-- btw sending you soupmail after :)
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Date: 4/2/2011 6:56:00 PM
Thought provoking write here Emma.A nice Quatrain.Enjoyed.Thanks for visiting my pages--kashinath
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Date: 4/2/2011 6:31:00 AM
Very dark verses on the taste of freedom, Emma
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