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The Task

He stands there with an empty glass waiting for a minute, he begins his task. The girl he likes is out to play, the walk to her consumes a day. She likes him but he cannot speak, the silence seems to last a week. His sentence takes a month to form, surely this is not the norm. Asking if she'd like a beer, that question almost took a year. A decade goes by with nothing to say, his brain can't function, not today. A century has now come and gone, why didn't he try? was she the one? angry he let the moment pass, as he stands there with his broken glass.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/31/2009 12:33:00 PM
Sounds like the man needs some help. Interesting approach to convey your message. Nice use of rhyme. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 3/20/2009 11:15:00 AM
The frozen moment is captured well on your canvas of time, a nice touch. God bless you
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