The Sycamore Tree

the sycamore tree's white bark color of fresh snow.. last gold leaf spirals

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/13/2012 10:44:00 PM

SO SAD TO SEE THE LAST REMNANTS OF WARM WEATHER SARA U SO BEAUTIFULLY CONVEYED ..WE HAVE A GORGEOUS OAK AND MAMMOSA IN BACKYARD STILL HOLDING ON ..BARELY LUV ..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2012 7:57:00 PM

there you go again, making haiku so beautiful.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/13/2012 6:26:00 PM

Wonderful trees they are, so forgiving of pollution and the bark is amazing. Did you know they are also called the Plane tree. Nice one to read.

Kash Poet

Date: 11/13/2012 4:13:00 AM

Beautiful haiku here Sara.Love the imagery.

Erich Goller

Date: 11/12/2012 5:18:00 PM

Beautiful nature , beautiful Haiku, 'Thanks for sharing it. God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/12/2012 5:03:00 PM

This is simply a brilliant and dynamic write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly powerful and wondrous poem this evening! What a delightful and charismatic piece, Great Work!!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/12/2012 4:56:00 PM

spot on, beautiful, with a hint of sadness...your haikus are wonderful, sara, they're always so REAL - we both wrote about trees losing their leaves! :-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2012 4:52:00 PM

Sara, nice image ,,i can see the leaf spiraling 2 the ground. excellent haiku...luv~pd