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The Swing

We sit together on a swing One foot touching the floor The gentle sway to and fro Like countless times before I close my eyes and fantasize Each sway represents one hill And when we swing back the other way It's the backside, oh what a thrill Anyone can see This ol' girl with me Has ridden this ride before We paid our dues And waited our turn I hope she stays on for more Because when she gets off Oscillation will stop The swing won't climb hills anymore So goes our life, as in swinging Her foot is the one on the floor An original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/13/2023 11:09:00 PM
just lovely poem penned; I enjoyed your loving thoughts
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/14/2023 6:37:00 AM
Thank you, Mahtab. It pleases me to see you this morning. I appreciate your kindness.
Date: 3/13/2023 9:59:00 AM
Love this love story told through a timeless swing :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/13/2023 10:47:00 AM
thank you, Kim. I take no greater pleasure than when people read and comment on my old poems. I always thought some of them were pretty good but i was not established and got very few reads. thank you from the bottom of my heart:)
Date: 4/7/2017 2:13:00 PM
An endearing piece with great nostalgia and a beautiful reflection on life. Superb writing DT :-) lynnxxx
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Date: 1/16/2016 4:35:00 PM
So lovely!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/16/2016 4:41:00 PM
Thank you, Mindy, for your kind words and taking the time to read.

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