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The Sweetest Starlight

The Sweetest Starlight You are the sweetest starlight shining across the ocean so pure Moonlighting and enchanting my dreams with warmth aglow, Touching gently my heart and soul with your beauty and wonder; If we were together—I would hold you so gently in my arms and I Would forever kiss your adoring lips with a passionate goodnight. Love is a faraway queen rising in the morning sunshine’s warm rays, And your light glows brilliantly as the dewdrops glisten on my dreams Of pure sweet surrender and kiss the very depth of my immortal soul; You are the light of Heaven's dream of a rainbow's flight of angels Arriving at Heaven’s gate and coming to me on a beam of silver light. Mesmerized I am as I embrace you as the heart, soul, passion and Desire of my life—I see you as my true dream and my heart’s delight; Feeling palpably your wonderful caress as you ask me to kiss you, And to place your ethereal lips upon my very own knowing that My heart and soul are open now to your loving heavenly embrace. Gary Bateman, Liam McDaid, and Michael Clarke A Collaborated Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved August 2, 2015 (Unrhymed Quintain)

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Date: 8/17/2015 5:38:00 PM
Oh a perfect trio!!! Be still my heart, I think it is melting from the warmth of your words! Wonderfully done all of you!
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Date: 8/14/2015 4:49:00 PM
what a trio... fantastic poetry so well sewn like a beautiful weave... huggs!
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Date: 8/8/2015 9:32:00 AM
Liam Mate!! Thanks for the second post of our poem here. It was really a pleasure working with you and Mike on this most wonderful piece. I think this particular write turned out very well!! This one has such a beautiful and meaningful message!! Cheers and Have a Great Weekend!! Gary
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Date: 8/7/2015 6:49:00 PM
Hi Liam, Gary n' Michael!Very beautiful romantic sweet captivating love poem, you've painted here,my dearest friend Liam in collaboration with our very dear friends Gary n' Michael.Very beautifully written!Just dazzling!Excellent!I truly enjoyed it.A very enchanting piece to be held close to my heart.smiling.Your pens are mighty golden!Great collaboration!A 7 to each + fav!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 8/7/2015 3:50:00 PM
- If there are dreams about a beautiful love poems .... I read it here and now - My heart knows, my eye sees how beautiful this is! - I wish you a lovely weekend, Liam (Gary and Mike) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/7/2015 2:05:00 PM
wow what a wonderful collaboration Gary Liam and Mike - so wonderful to see you writing again Mike - three wonderful poets working in perfect harmony with a fantastic romantic write:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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