The Surge

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storm waves amassed if only I had waited for the waves to pass my poetry could have floated gently to shore

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Sunlite Wanter

Date: 1/25/2019 9:29:00 AM

Just ran across this poem What a wonderful thought!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/7/2019 12:56:00 PM

This is quite profound, Arthur. The words we write when under severe stress are angrier and less "poetic," I've found. This is a fave for me, my friend! Hugs, Carolyn

Jan Allison

Date: 1/5/2019 10:24:00 AM

poetry in motion Art:-) hugs Jan xx

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/5/2019 8:19:00 AM

If only...won't be lonely...so hard to be patient...need to lasso my emotions...

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/5/2019 7:48:00 AM

But such is life we could be waiting forever for calm weather, battle through the storm I say. Tom.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 1/5/2019 5:05:00 AM

Thank God you hadn't waited for "the waves to pass"! .. Your poetry is handling and keeping up with the "storm waves"! An outstanding Cinquain! Keep it up Arthur! A great write, enjoyed the read.. Best regards.. God bless you.