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The Sunflower Rises

Conquering new territories climbing up the stairway new beginnings hanging on the edge of a dream an empire arises from dark ashes flash petals catch one gem Through honeycombed dewdrops softly spinning clear golden the sparkle upon your tabernacle silken touch vision of deep beauty shines immaculate heart Beholding rose gold sparkles sugar coating light dazzling before the eyes crystal sparks ignite rainbow gleams Through a mist of tears travelling one picture everything shrinks in your shadow perfect sunbeams warmly come alive Touching clouds dancing with teardrops falling over an angel salted from the ocean seagulls lament faraway distant overseas calls (Unrhymed Tercet)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/2/2016 1:59:00 PM
Beauty and sadness..I.can feel both in your verses..Awesome.
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Date: 10/2/2016 9:16:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 10/2/2016 8:33:00 AM
Hey Liam ! That is one heck of a poem, well writing and good metaphors using. To be honest that poem sound so creepy in the beginning but I enjoyed reading it.Keep up the good work.
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Date: 10/2/2016 8:31:00 AM
- This is beautiful my friend Liam .... just beautiful :) - I wish you a lovely Sunday and a great new week - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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