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The Sun Pouts

I wish I could fly On the wings of an angel Cross the vast ocean and sky To where you're stationed. Your work must be done We know this without a doubt The public good be done, but The sun seems to pout. Puffs of cutting clouds Have dampened its smile so bright For it's been separated From the world it loves. Even with its ache Continues to emanate All the light and warmth it has True love never fades. I wish I could fly On the wings of an angel Cross the vast ocean and sky To where you're stationed. By CarolineCécile March 4, 2011.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/12/2011 6:01:00 AM
Désolé pour ne pas écrire de nombreux commentaires ou pour ne pas écrire du tout, mais j'ai encore des problèmes avec mon bras et la main. Sometimes I dreamt that I could fly, would be really great if we could!!! Lovely poem! Alles Gute and have a great weekend!...Gert:)
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Date: 3/6/2011 8:52:00 AM
Caroline, I'm so glad you are posting again and sharing your talent with us. I'm sure there are many people wishing they could spread wings and fly to see their loved ones overseas. When you're forced to wait behind, it can be very lonely. I hope your new beau is not stationed overseas. Another beautiful poem from you! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/4/2011 12:54:00 PM
The weekend is here and I am trying to get some poetry read. I am glad you had something new here for me to enjoy today Caroline. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2011 10:25:00 AM
Very philosophial expressions on The sun pouts, Caroline
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