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The Sun Has a Headache

Resplendent daylight's illustrious star, so proud to promenade, decided she is sleeping in and deftly drew the shade, complaining she can't stand the light . . . she has a migraine. Our atmosphere's all grizzled grays, disconsolate with rain. Wet volleys in profusion, a deluge when we step out for the clouds absent "her highness" are having quite a pout! So downpours have your heyday; bluster loudly stormy winds - all day brolly and brogans must remain our closest friends. © Faye Lanham Gibson, June 9, 2014

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Date: 7/13/2014 7:48:00 PM
I love the content and rhyme of this piece :) well done!
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Date: 6/26/2014 12:34:00 PM
I love the title so much and well written poem. Congrats
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Date: 6/25/2014 12:24:00 PM
Faye! I think this poem is absolutely delightful!!.. One of those why didn't I think of that moments.. Hugs. Arlene
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Date: 6/25/2014 5:10:00 AM
Read and enjoyed the poem. Congrats on the win,
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Date: 6/24/2014 8:43:00 PM
FAYE.. Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting one of my many contests. I enjoyed every entry! If you like, stop by my latest blog "Never Say Never or my newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact here on this site. Always & Forever ~LINDA
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Date: 6/11/2014 8:47:00 PM
Title grabbed me and the write was a pleasure to read, actually inspiring . Nature swirls and runs yet depend on the rays that are the sun's. Fantastic write my friend! BBBravooo!!!
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Date: 6/10/2014 6:00:00 PM
this is so cool, personifying the sun this way. very creative thinking!!!
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Date: 6/10/2014 2:53:00 PM
Wow this is sweet, Faye Gibson, what a nice way to write nature! Woooow, can't stop reading over and over my hairs are high,........lol,nice to know you! Richard!
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Date: 6/10/2014 1:57:00 PM
What a way to look at it. Yeah, she is thinking of taking a nap. That is why her shade is closed, haha. Never think of it that way. And the rain and everything else are having their way, lol. Cute!
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Date: 6/10/2014 4:22:00 AM
Wow Faye, you are really on a roll here! LOVE your sense of humor and the title made me laugh out loud! Much love to you my friend - Tim
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